Score: 7

"Cute."

submission: Lazy Panda Cccaboong

date: June 5, 2008

It was a simple, yet cute concept. I just think the timing could have been better, possibly the use of different shots might have helped. Though it did have great visuals.

Nice job.

Score: 6

"Daw"

submission: Adren's NG

date: June 5, 2008

You have an awesome lisp :P

Also.. Aw shucks.

Score: 5

"Uuuuh..."

submission: The Mario Kart Showdown

date: June 5, 2008

The song wasn't a terrible rehash on the original, it's just you cannot sing. It was almost near impossible to listen to. Trust me, your accent had nothing to do with it. Just about all my favourite bands have british lead singers lmao.

I recommend just doing the writing and finding someone to do your lyrics.

Score: 7

"..."

submission: Indiada Jodes

date: June 4, 2008

The song at the end really just took the cake.

Score: 7

"It's missing something."

submission: Weekend Fishing: Aussie

date: June 4, 2008

It needed an Australian voice over and remarks from the mate.

Seriously, I would have done that for you hahaha.

Score: 10

"!!!"

submission: MGS: The book

date: June 3, 2008

!...... FAP FAP FAP

Score: 7

"Ooooh."

submission: RWD: 015 Dinnersaur

date: June 3, 2008

So THAT'S how the tipping system works in America.

Score: 7

"???"

submission: Why Da Long Face?

date: June 3, 2008

She was also raped by Kermit the frog by the sound of things.

Score: 10

"Excellent."

submission: art in the playground

date: June 3, 2008

You gave the characters very strong expressive personalties, along with strong physical emotion. It felt like they were going to "jump off the page", if you'd pardon the pun. One of the best mix of animation and live action shots I've seen on Newgrounds.

Great work.

Score: 8

"Better then the first."

submission: More Brawl Taunts

date: June 1, 2008

Although I know I told Rina most of my criticism prior to the release, I think some of it didn't get fixed before the final cut. The "big gay dance" thing was improved from what it originally was going to be, but I still think it could have been delivered even better.

I'm not familiar with this "Jerry" character from Flash Tub, so I really didn't mean for any intentional similarities in the fan boy voice I did. Also I couldn't get over how my character said "Why did you do that Ganondolf", when you didn't place him in the final product like what the script said.

All around, the final piece is good. But there are certain things I can't help but be picky about. I think some of falls down to out of context referential humour not being my cup of tea (not that all of it was out of context).

I guess the originals finally going to be bumped off the front page!

Good work guys.