Hmmm.
That was very boring, didn't keep me interested one little bit. That's almost worse then that Hey ya VG style. I mean, your not bad at animating with sprites, you just need to develop more of a storyline. I mean, I can sit through a episode of "Rise of the mushroom kingdom" without out getting bored. That was just repetitive and boring, I really struggled to watch it. But I still reviewed it as fairly as possible, keep at it.